Mister, your game was not bad. Not good either!
Sadly, you are new at this and need help. Download ZZT CRIME, and you will understand that running thru big feilds of ammo and gems can become more of a chore than fun.
WORK is not FUN
You made a very good effort at the flags. and the multiple end thing was a good idea. but somehow, it didn't work well. And it was over too quickly.