Sudden Death I

I know SD I sucks like crap, cause it's my game! but that was before Mater Raze told me very important advice:" remember, u dont have to use the whole board coz when u create a board, u put a border round it." and that was after i sent him Boss 3, im going to update SD1 and Boss 3. So speacil thanks to Master Raze and C A for telling me it sucks like crap. o ya i also have another game in the Uploaded Games, its called, Time. timewhat.zip (i started zzting just last year!)

I could tell this was going to be bad from the point of, "December 30, 2999, New Year's Eve."

The plot's awful so far, man. 20-year-old dude sees his child dead and ALL he can say is, "Someone's going to pay." You need to work a ton on the dialogue.. and the spell-checker.

Most of the level design is poor wide-open spaces that leaves nothing to the imagination. Nothing interesting at all out of the object department, either.

I know it's only a demo and all, but I just don't see where this is going, and I think you don't know either. Don't make this game up as you go along, as that usually just leads to total crap.

Start over from scratch, except keep the title and the first screen and touch those up. Chunk most of the other boards, as they're totally useless.